I went to the park to see
a new singer I knew well
While I was there his songs
broke my heart with all his words
He sang and sang and I listened
and smiled at him all the while
hiding my pain from his eyes
My heart burning with desire
I used to be by his side
watching while he wrote his songs
but that's all over, you see
Music stole my Lover's soul
- Author: Soki (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 26th, 2013 11:11
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments2
This had such a sad twist in the end. I loved it. I could picture the whole scene as if I were right there.
Diamond, I love you LOL your comments always make my days so much brighter. Hve yourself a day full os sunshine just like the ones you give me, soki
the last lines took my breath away... music stole my lovers soul... truly and inspired line!
baj-a you are my other little ray of sunshine. Just like Diamond You bring me happijess with your comments and for that I thank you very much,soki
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