Enter me, oblivion
Signify, a sin of one
Don’t ask how, it is done
I don’t know anyone
Turn me around, you are done
Enter me, oblivion
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Author:
Jalso (
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You do very well at rhyme and rhythm. I enjoy your writing very much.
im glad you enjoy it, thank you for your complement. poem thing in particular is quite funny to me, it might be disgusting to others, and if you have seen it like have or have made an assesment on what it might mean, i apologize for it being gross.
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