sokibgb

UNTOUCHED



In the silence of the night

I hear you calling  me 

In the sunshine of the day

I see your face

In the calmness of the evening

I feel your presence

Yet your touch is still

So very far away

Comments5

  • diamonddagger

    HI Soki, I loved this poem.....yet your touch is still so very far away...I understand that feeling. My love was gone from me for a year and a half and it was pure torture. Beautiful piece of work. have a happy day. diamond.

  • sokibgb

    thanks Diamond for reading and understanding . Torture is the fight word not to mention loneliness and an emptiness too difficult to explain. Have a loving night, soki

  • baj-a

    you expressed the feelings of being away from the one you love very well. beautifully written.

    • sokibgb

      Thank you baj-a, that means you have also shared this painful experience and understand the feelings I tried to express.

      Have a day full of light and love, soki

    • bigwolf

      a lovely and heartfelt poem

      • sokibgb

        Thank you bigwolf for reading and commenting on this particular poem. It is very close to my heart, but that's easy to do when you write about a person that you care about. soki











































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      • colin

        Soki so full of emotions that burst out from your words

        • sokibgb

          colin, thank you for reading, liking and commenting my poems, soki



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