Space Between


In the ashes they made me

Forming and saying

He is the one, the ultimate gun

They let me displace, form a space

Between you and me, I want to break the space between

They don't want me seen, but I want a scene 

A scene with a lady, the lady with a name

A name of yours, but they wont open up the doors

So im stuck with this space and a never changing place

Why do they pace, my mind and its weights

Please change this space, add something new

Something that is true, something I can feel

Something I have seen

Change the space between

  • Author: Jalso (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 2nd, 2013 23:38
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 50


  • baj-a

    I know you categorized this as a love poem but I find it sad that there are those spaces between that you can't figure out how to fill and remove. good write!

  • sokibgb

    Fsill those empty space spaces with love and your life will be fuu of happiness. Good write, soki

  • diamonddagger

    Beautiful but sad. I hope you find something to fill those empty spaces with.

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