Can you just get one more chance to embrace her?
Sadly, you just can not
Your mother is gone forever
You will just have to adjust as things come about
Remember the things that she taught you
And all the moments that you shared
Forever wear your heart on your sleeve
Just open your eyes and be aware
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Author:
The Brooklyn Six Project™ (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Sad
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Comments1
I really like this, my interpretation of your poems makes me feel like the poem is a little dark and the lack of punctuation makes me think that the pain of the person the persona is talking to is never-ending because there are no boundaries to stop the pain running off the page. Then the capital letters, is light a way for the person to adjust and change their life within that poem, like they are starting afresh with a new line and a new sentence. it was short, yet meaningful!
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