Those broken
words are like poison
they hurt the mind
and make u lost
and blind.
a lost world with
no open window.
it gets so closed
in u can't breathe
the grip is tightening
your heart is hurting.
all u want is love
all u want is not to
be alone .
but those words
still float in the air
like invisable poison.
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Author:
sonnetelectric7413 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Its about how words can hurt you and how they feel.
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Comments1
A good idea to spell check before you post . . . its got some power in it, apart from glaring typo in the title and final line which suggests a childlike frame of mind. If that is a stylistic choice like using "u" instead of "you" I missed it.
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