As every day goes by and the sun fades,
As every day goes by and the sun counts down our hours,
As the sky gets darker by the hour,
I guess what I’m trying to say is time is life,
I guess wasting time is just wasting your life,
So pay attention to when i say time is full-time not part time,
So pay attention to when i say forget the past time,
Live up to the present time cause there is no way to recover time when those days are gone,
So for every second in every minute i treasure,
For every minute in every hour i embrace cause that split second,minute, and hour is my life,
Time is my life
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melisa alpizar (
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- Comment from author about the poem: it means time is life so treasure it cause we never know when our last breath is seconds away.
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Yes I agree with your comments,live for the moment.
Thank You @grange_m
I'm really loving this poetry thing. I've never really done it before,but I'm really enjoying it
really? i usually write what i feel but my poem "time" is different from what i usually write.
Do you write as well, other than poems?
just poems. i write what i feel i pour my feelings onto paper cause i know that way i can express my self. its a form of art to me. my friend told me this once "good art has a story behind it, it opens peoples minds, I'm a story teller myself i do it through visualization, you do it through words." so thats how i view poetry.
Excellent, I'm looking for some ideas for my next poem,I've got a plan just putting it together now really.
what kind of ideas ?
Hi Melisa.
I hope you're well.
I like my poems to rhyme I suppose a bit ocd.
But I also like them to have a meaning.
Did you read my president poker school?
I am thank you. i like them to rhyme as well and have meaning. And no i didn't what is it ????
Hi,
Have a look on my account and you will see the poem
okay i will.
I agree, so true you capture the point well.
thank you. I try 🙂
I like the repetitive nature of this poem, almost like a desperate plea to remind the one who takes time for granted.
nicely done!
Thank You. And people don't realize what they take for granted, I just lost someone and that person meant a lot to me so Ive just had a lot on mind lately and I've been writing more than usual lately.
Sorry to hear of your loss.
Its truly amazing how we all react happenings in life.
Poetry is such a healthy way of venting emotion, good or bad.
Good job hun, keep it up.x
thank you.
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