Poetic Dan

A heavy heart but still strong
Time is an illusion
When emotion is gone
But when it comes back
You see through the tricks
We actually need it for it to exist
Any I feel shall now be embarrassed
Without it I'd not know time & space

To appreciate just the simple things
Makes words and touch
A truly priceless, precious gift you can give.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 3rd, 2015 10:22
  • Category: Spiritual
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  • De-nyce_A


    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you 🙂

    • Neville

      I like this.. One of your earliest it seems and I'm sure since originally posted you have experienced a whole roller-coaster ride of emotional ups and downs.... Neville

      • Poetic Dan

        I thought this was one of my hardest times and that I should not write what I do or feel the way I do. I've now come to grips with being me it's pretty cool 😉

        Always appreciated
        With peace and respect

        • Neville

          Peace and respect, plus a decent dollop of All Good Things, back at ya.... N

        • Caring dove

          Well expressed ... “ a heavy heart but still strong “ some of us go through so much and feel so much sadness yet we endure it and we come through it .,, I especially love your last verse

          • Poetic Dan

            Bless you for coming all the way back here, I was in a dark place that I once knew at 14 and it was a place I didn't want to stay anyone... 700 ramblings later I am balancing well lol

            • Caring dove

              I’ve been in many dark places . I understand how difficult it can be . Glad you are feeling more balanced now .

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