There Once Was


There once was a girl,
Living in an ungrateful, toxic world
No one cared to change it,
For they'd die if they tried
She wanted to change it
She was just a girl
Who would listen to her opinion?

With the wind blew change,tho
Small, her courage held strong.
For each step her words
Grew with depth, this girl with all
Her might,swore to end this fight

  • Authors: Crystal Moon (Pseudonym), corey racine
  • Visible: All lines
  • Finished: March 10th, 2016 16:30
  • Limit: 15 stanzas
  • Invited: Public (any user can participate)
  • Comment from author about the poem: Follow the story! I'd like for it to touch on social topics, like colorism, sexism, or homophobia.
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 72
  • User favorite of this poem: darkreflection.


  • darkreflection

    So what's going on no one has any comments or interested in adding

    • Rachel

      I wanted it to be kind of like a story, but no one is adding.

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