Please my dear
While I have this time
I need to let you hear
What has been on my mind
It seems that inside of me
There must have been a covered light
One that only you could see
One that only you could bring to sight
You see for many years it seems
I have tried to hide from sight
This passion I have had to live
This need for another life
To tell you what you did
I fear I don’t have the time to say
But if I had the chance
I would take to the end of my days
What you've come to mean to me
Is that you have become a part
Of this man you see
Of his awakening heart
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Author:
LaRose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: i am not a young man and through my years i have stopped and started writing several times. I hope this awakening lasts to my end.
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Comments1
There's a saying, "Taking poetic license". That is supposed to cover many grammatical and other type errors. However, it doesn't cover everything, and "you've did" and "you come" in your poetry lines are two of them. If you remove the 've, from "You've did" and put it on the "You come", it would be grammatically correct, less distracting, and more pleasurable to read. The thoughts you penned are very cool otherwise.
Thank you MsMermaid, i will make the correction. I appreciate the review
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