Everything has a meaning
sometimes might be subtle
and sometimes more distinct
as we can decipher
This is the mother earth
like a Eden garden
where we living
and shaping the destiny
by our own efforts, the karma
yes, i understand we have sorrow
but believe me
This will not last for long
at least not for enduring
Look at the flowers
blooming all around
spring has begun already
it has spread charisma on all flowers
with variant colors
like the cherry blossom tree, शाकुरा
time is changing
believe me we are living
in a dynamic space and time
Everything is changing
And of course
Everything has meaning
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Author:
Sushil Nyaupane (
Offline) - Published: March 26th, 2016 15:39
- Comment from author about the poem: I am a beginner in poem writing. I hope you will give me some suggestion ahead to go forward in this mysterious art.
- Category: Nature
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Comments1
You have a good start. Write what your emotions or heart is telling you. Reread your poem more than one time to make sure everything not only makes sense to you, but to those who will read your poem. Whatever the subject matter stay with that theme from beginning to end. Don't let a word or sentence that doesn't seem to fit with what you are trying to say confuse the reader so they have to go back and make sure they didn't miss read something. It will come together for you. It just takes time. You will do just fine.
Thank you.
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