I look up at the night sky,
As my love straight passes by.
Aloof of the truth
I dream my ego dreams,
fully asleep. even among the shining beams
Love tapped me on the shoulder,
i turn and see.
Beauty staring right at me
Her eyes were brown, with a sparkle in her pupils.
Her teeth white like crystal.
she smiles, and all the while
she's splitting my heart.
Moses and the Nile.
Truth be told, we said were in love.
But it was more like lust drowning,
wrapped with thick blankets of mistrust.
These are the truths, partners rarely discuss.
Our hearts are now in Rust.
Defiled by the lies of Emotion
Beguiled by this false sense of Devotion
Love and Lust they don't make sense,
I think they both are products of the mind.
I'm probably mistaken about one.
Because with love, I know deep down, there's something Divine.
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Author:
O.M.S (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 30th, 2016 08:43
- Comment from author about the poem: Okay so. I would love to get some input about this poem. Because I added 70% of it while i was typing it.
- Category: Love
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Comments2
You are joking,right?
Feed?Back?
Tomorrow...
Alas,translate the Title?!
Joking about what? and the Title is in arabic, it means "my love". And yes feedback, i would love your feedback
Joking about "added 70% of it while i was typing it". It's so good....
Not sure about the title in Arabic?! I think you describe a 'dream love'? So....
I also think it needs a second look,but it's your call.I am sure you could improve it and I am looking forward to it. Now,what I think about LOVE?
Love could bring Paradise to Earth
Bond the East with the West
Transform a lion into lamb
Make broken glass sound like harp.
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