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Your light eyes and intense smile

added to your charm.

My tongue was tied

I couldn't flatter you enough.

The touching of my hand struck an alarm

and made my heart beat fast,fast,faster...

But then you did that.

Your flame paralyzed my entrails

My sweat start eating off my veins.

I stepped back pale.

All I ever wanted is to be a dream in your Brain....


  • samishere

    Love it! So glad I gave you the idea, you've turned it into a wonderfully elegant piece.

  • Survivor48

    Wow, great rhyming poem with good metaphors as well. excellent job!

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