Your light eyes and intense smile
added to your charm.
My tongue was tied
I couldn't flatter you enough.
The touching of my hand struck an alarm
and made my heart beat fast,fast,faster...
But then you did that.
Your flame paralyzed my entrails
My sweat start eating off my veins.
I stepped back pale.
All I ever wanted is to be a dream in your Brain....
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Author:
lysistrata (
Offline) - Published: June 16th, 2016 09:07
- Comment from author about the poem: There is a small,tiny lie somewhere and the Progress of this affair would be re-examined..... Thanks to Sam for the idea.😉
- Category: Love
- Views: 56
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Comments2
Love it! So glad I gave you the idea, you've turned it into a wonderfully elegant piece.
Wow, great rhyming poem with good metaphors as well. excellent job!
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