This hospital band has made my wrist red.
Yet it could be from the time I tried to forget.
Forget how to breathe and forget I was sad.
It wont go away, my wrist is still red.
(m.g)
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- Comment from author about the poem: I thought about committing suicide to the point where I went numb. The hospital band is representing how tightly I tried to hang on but also so badly how I wanted to let go.
- Category: Sad
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Great poem, I've been at the breaking point myself it shows in my poetry as well.. thank you for sharing. You may have inspired me to write one on suicide. I'll mention you if I do.
I'll have to read up on some of yours!
Please do.. warning.. i just started writing so it might not be so great
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