There may be things I detest

lying right here in my lonely bed


Eyes closed I'm almost alive

skipping through memories

one at a time


I dreamt of her long long ago

watched by stars we danced

the moon gave us comfort but the sun

it washed out the life


If I'm to die

with memories grasped in my palm

in soul I'll live a butterfly

captured by the most poetic playwright


I feel in some ways I love you

princess in my head


Mindfulness should not be test 

the truth being I simply don't know you yet


  • Author: samishere (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 28th, 2016 14:59
  • Comment from author about the poem: We all feel lonely sometimes, but its important to remember the good times. You were once happy so there is no reason history will not repeat itself. There's always bad phases. I've been struggling creatively lately so let me know what you think.
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  • lysistrata

    Do what you can,with what you have,where you are (in your lonely bed)...👴
    I do not want to know details... Just dream...🌌
    I might have an answer soon enough , 💁 wicked Sam!

    • samishere

      Thank you, you're always so supportive 🙂

    • Dee

      Emotional and heart felt poem Samishere, with clear images and a nice flow to your chosen words..Your loneliness runs through this work . and some lines I especially love -

      I dreamt of her long long ago
      watched by stars we danced
      the moon gave us comfort
      but the sun it washed out the life.

      Also your surprise ending lines.

      Bravo my friend.....Dee

      • samishere

        Thank you so much Dee!

      • Tropicana

        'the moon gave use comfort' because when it's night you dream 'the sun washed out the life' because during day you have to get up and can't dream? am I right in these connations? loved it btw you couldn't tell you've been 'struggling creatively' by reading this more like this plz

        • samishere

          yes you've interpreted it in exactly the way I was aiming for 🙂 many thanks for your kind words

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