A Riveting Story Poem, by SheWasTheSun, at My poetic side

You broke me. Did you forget?

Last time we both left with regret

But I took the wound and the scar

While you thought it out from afar

I suffocated from the smoke

Left by the flame you stoked

While you nurtured a new ember

How could you not remember?

I was nearly crushed under the weight

Of your love turned hate

While you ran wild like a summer storm

Reckless and dark, but somehow still warm

They say times change

Though to me, it seems strange

That you could have possibly missed

A riveting story like this

Comments +

willyweed July 17th, 2016 20:25
I like it very good rhyme , flow and structure! ww
- SheWasTheSunJuly 17th, 2016 20:34
  Thank you so much!
lysistrata July 18th, 2016 00:45
I am here my friend. I never miss a riveting story,a love story,a dying story....Inspiration is here to stay:good rhyme.
- SheWasTheSunJuly 18th, 2016 16:43
  Aw I missed you friend! Thank you for the kind feedback.

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