Freedom, such an unusual word.
Ghosts in my mind insist on such formality,
that I must brave the ocean's sea.
Do birdcages keep butterflies from flying the world?
I suppose that if I look for what doesn't exist
perhaps I'll find what, when I started, I had missed.
If a bird that flies away is free
where does that leave me?
There is an endless question on repeat
That makes me turn in circles.
Is saying that we are free, truly deceit?
I wonder, can a birdcage trap butterflies too, or is that all internal?
I suppose if you thicken the bars you'd be safer,
but then I always ask, what are you hiding from?
Even if you had a whole acre,
I think you'd still be claustrophobic, it's just what you've become.
So, in my humble opinion
cages only hide or trap.
And if you're hiding, I think you made the wrong decision.
Run run run but you can't hide from your past.
Do the bars of a cage keep butterflies in too?
- Author: Izzi Lynn (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: July 23rd, 2016 21:17
- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem for my Abstraction poetry course, and I was considering what to post today when I thought of this. An Abstraction Of Freedom's message is especially subtle unlike most of my works. It only starts to make sense towards the end of the poem, and it helps if you've read some of my other poems based off butterflies. The basic message is that, with butterflies representing freedom and just who you are in essence, that some people try to cage their own and everyone else's butterflies. The recurring question is: is it even possible to truly cage someone else's butterfly?
- Category: Surrealist
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