You cut my heart
Straight down the middle
And left it out
So the gnats could
Pick on it till
Its black and rotten
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Author:
Elijah (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 8th, 2016 08:08
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Comments2
Awesome write much feeling and emotion
Interesting metaphor. It really conveys a concrete thought about a broken heart. We can relate to a banana because its so mundane. Great job!
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