1/2 Banana

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You cut my heart 

Straight down the middle 

And left it out 

So the gnats could 

Pick on it till

Its black and rotten

 

  • Author: Elijah (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 8th, 2016 08:08
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
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  • Tony36

    Awesome write much feeling and emotion

  • rrodriguez

    Interesting metaphor. It really conveys a concrete thought about a broken heart. We can relate to a banana because its so mundane. Great job!



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