A Hopeless Love


A disease I have, I am Immortal

To me was a blessing, until I met you.

Only you I want, although the a future is futile

None the less for love I shall power through


My love you give my life a reason

Alone I would crave the touch of your skin

Only you in my mind, any else would be treason

For years I have lived, but with you it begins


I slowly count down our days together 

Only an eternity with you could ever suffice

Our last seconds together I try to savor 

A future without you, the choice I realize


As your life ebbs away, so does my soul

As you fly away, with you I must go...







  • Author: bdradysalis (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 10th, 2016 00:39
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 34


  • bdradysalis

    Please give comments and ratings. Much appreciated

  • rrodriguez

    Much love runs through the stanzas and much love oozes through the words. This in a fine poem full of feelings, love, emotion, all wrapped up in words conveyed sincerely and with much love. Loved it.

    • bdradysalis

      Thank you so much, I really appreciate it.

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