A demon disguised as an angel.
Welcomed me with open arms
with promises that she will not judge me for my past.
Promises that she will never turn away from me
that she will be my redemption.
but she had other plans
plans to poison my mind and consume all light within in me
To leave me in a place of pure darkness for me to suffer.
i was too late the damage was dealt
ive become a victim
a victim to her wicked games.
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Author:
clockwork (
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- Comment from author about the poem: At the start they are innocent but as days turn into months and months into years you see them for who they truly are. A demon in disguise
- Category: Sad
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This piece speaks to me, on many levels. In fact, it reminds me of one of the works I've written before, a few months ago, to be precise. About a demon in disguise, hiding in the flesh of a man.
With that, nicely done. I greatly appreciate the demon in disguise theory. Thanks for the read
~RTBH
Many thanks for the feedback. If you have it on here I'll be sure to give a read. 🕰
I don't think I have it here, but I can check elsewhere, to see if I have it posted, if so I'll be sure to let you know
Look forward to it thanks
Check out The Boy; Lost Treasure.
It's the edited version, for the original had been lost, except for the first for lines, that's from the original, but it's still the same concept.
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