All I do is give
All you do is take
You told me that you love me
But all your truths are fake
I know throughout the summer
I felt things for another
She was closer than a brother
So we never hit the covers
I gave my all to us
For you I'd take a bus
With you my heart was steel
But then there came the rust
You left me in the past
You left me in the dust
I don't know what I did
To make you feel you must
Leave all that we had
Did I make you really mad
Did I make you really sad
What did I do that was so bad
I guess I'll never know
I'll just steady ride the flow
I won't forget you
Girl our past I'll always hold
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Author:
teenageheartbreak (
Offline) - Published: August 17th, 2016 15:12
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Comments3
I'm not really feeling this one. In thinking about making poems where I use 4 popular lines from a song and input them into my own. I don't want to seem like I'm copying anybody or taking credit for something that's not mine. It wouldn't be a lot or most of it. I don't know. Tell me what you all think about this idea and this poem. As always thank you for reading. TAHB
I also have rap lyrics that I could post but I don't know if I would because they don't really have the style or flow that my poems on this profile have. Also feel free to give me something to try to make something out of. I like challenges. TAHB
I love the rhymes and rhythm of this poem. Very well done!
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