Inspiring you to write your own,
my words fell silent
your heart to roam
Creating space for thoughts to breathe,
new feelings await
my loves reprieve
(Villanova Pennsylvania: August, 2016)
- Author: Kurt Philip Behm ( Offline)
- Published: August 21st, 2016 10:28
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 22
Comments2
Your poems have a mystical quality. They tug on your soul, challenge the mind and provoke you to think. The poem reminded me of a passage in the book Song of Songs 3:5, "... Do not arouse or awaken love until it so desires." So if love is reprieved, are we cancelling or postponing it? Love awaits, let's not make it wait...
Sometimes (IMO) you have to pull away to give others the room they need. Some personalities in a 2-person relationship can be overwhelming.
Thanks Roberto.
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