A thought born from rage
A decision made in haste
An action performed out of anger
As a precious heart’s laid to waste
Trembling lips blow out smoke
From the fatal shot of words spoken
As the sanctity of ones promise
Is left shattered and broken
A soul stained with blood
From that murderous shot
As the words enter the heart
Painful and red hot
A grieving face wet with tears
And the others eyes filled with shame
As misguided emotions
Were most likely to blame
Jealousy, mistrust,
Insecurity and greed
From their tight grip
Some can never be freed
This emotional war
Is brutal and tough
But as hard as some fight
It is never enough
So what’s left are the victims
Of this senseless war
Leaving the survivors bloodied and broken
And empty to the core
Words and emotions
Are powerful weapons and tools
So make sure you don’t leave them
In the hands of loves fools….
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great message in this well done poem! ww
I like it alot it is very well writtened
"This emotional war we fight
Is brutal and tough
But as hard as some fight
It is never enough"
Very Well written.Try to change one of the 2 "fight" and I am a bit trouble by your 'conclusion'?!
"So make sure you don’t leave them
In the hands of loves fools…."
Have you never been a love fool?!!
There is a great message in this, with an excellent flow. Thank you for your time.
~RTBH
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