See the dust outlined by the light on the pane
Hear the sounding beat of the night and the rain
Feel the darkness and it’s satin stain
Break away from your life and your love and your chain
Break away
Slam the door in the cold and the frost out of sight
Run down the street all but lost in the night
Beat your hand on your hip in a rythm with fight
Dance in the water with the firelight
Dance
Look at the moon and it’s white winter gleam
Shook at the sight of the street as a dream
Now sing to the sky with the first sunbeam
As evening fades look again and scream
I used to keep to the beat of the every man
Now I sing with the wolves like no-one can
Sing
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Author:
Reivax Camlost (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The fire fell as we reveled in the night / the raindrops bow to the firelight
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1. Check OUT this:
"Slam the door in the cold and the frost out of sight
Run down the street all but lost in the night"
Maybe?
"Slam the door to the darkness and the frost of the mind
Run down the street and set a firelight"
2. "The fire fell as we reveled in the night / the raindrops bow to the firelight": Is there a typo ⁉
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Thank you so much, feedback is my ultimate and coveted resource!
I think those verses are great, and applaud your poetic talent!
I don't know if there's a typo... Hmmm.
Alright, I wrote another poem (just as great as this one, maybe better), that's like a sister poem to this one, using the lines you wrote!
Will post it tomorrow.
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