The end has come for me today
so I must say good-bye
It may be hard to understand
but I trust that you will try
My heart's so filled with emptiness
controlled by misery
I've finally seen that what I am
was never meant to be
The tears I've cried so recently
are for pain nobody knows
I just can't take it anymore
it's time for me to go
Is life suppose to be this way
with thoughts of suicide
Or has my life become a loss
with no one to confide
Does anybody understand
the pain that fills my heart
Or understand that all of this
is tearing me apart
Concealment isn't optional
for no one seems to care
I hide within my shattered thoughts
And I'm drowning in despair
My heart has grown so heavy
and still I don't know why
The end has come for me today
and I must say good-bye
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Author:
Jeff (
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- Category: Sad
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Comments6
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Hey... That's some pretty dark writing there.
I'm sure everyone at some point or another finds themselves in that low a place.
Is the who or what that is causing you to feel like that worth it?
A whole wide world out there amigo. I hope you are not in that dark place anymore.
Thank you for the time to comment...I certainly appreciate it. As for the poem, it has been a struggle but God is good and I'll live lol. Again, thank you for the comment ...I need them
Great write
Thank you
Welcome
Another great poem. You have a great style of writing I can definitely follow. Even though the poems you write are sad, I wonder if you get the same relief I do when I write my poems...
Thanks again for commenting...I need them. I write poetry to calm the demons from the past which haunt me still.
I know the feeling. Not a problem, keep writing.
parallel lives-- poetry is the heart bleeding -thank god for words -thought provoking read --the bear
Thank you for your comment
obviously this was published a while ago, but somehow my readings led me to this poem. I actually cried while reading it. It is such an amazing poem.
Thank you so.much for taking time to comment...i really appreciate it. Yes....this poem was written a few years ago when I felt life was over for me. I cant say it has been an easy road....but I will make it. Thanks again for your comment....Im glad you enjoyed it
Thanks to all who have commented
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