Sinning can be forgiven?

DMC13

They say when you believe in God,

there's a set path for you,

he made a story for you,

people think that much is true

but I think that's a lie though

you're telling me that slavery was the story set for those people

there was no one to save them at that moment

believing didn't cause change,action had to be chosen

the "story" that was made for them changed

but you might say that was part of the whole story

to be a plot twist so the story wouldn't be boring

if that's the case,then God is a fucked up author

Knowing he can control the story,but he still doesn't make the story proper

 

But wait.....

it was people all along

who made God up se we can sing about him in a song

leaving us weak.....

making us think believing will save us all

but it leaves us deceased....

 

But God works in mysterious ways apparently......

all you have to do is ask for forgiveness and you're let go from your sinning

but what about your message?.....

to commit genocide on a whole race

ask for forgiveness

then get sent to heaven?.......

 

It's an excuse for you problems

"God as me covered,he's just watching"

but you're selfish.....

thinking asking for forgiveness won't leave you're "enemy" restless

 

You make your own path......

don't expect someone that might no exist hold that

you're talking to a phantom when you enter the churches

forgiveness leaves other individuals feeling worthless....

but was it even worth it......

to leave an individual hurting when they didn't believe in a judgemental story

that says if you're a different person

you'll be the one burning......

in hell........

 

 

 

 

  • Author: DMC13 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 2nd, 2016 13:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: I'm just tired of these people following a book full of hate,and then have people who defend it,even if they haven't read a page of it,thinking its all great......its not......
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Comments2

  • Tony36

    Some people have no idea what they are talking about. They use the Bible to hide behind and do what they wish. Then turn right around and condemn those who do the same things. Great write

  • ShadedSorrow

    Being raised in a religious family, I totally agree. I don't trust religions, they are so complicated and confusing. People criticize you for being a hypocrite, yet they are usually the hypocritical ones.

    • DMC13

      Thanks for seeing that honestly, I appreciate that



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