He told her he loved her
That he'd never leave her
He was sixty and she was eighteen
The irony
Her youth killed her
She was scared as fuck
And drank too much
Lost for days in powders and smoke
Poisoned by her thoughts
And taken by her fear
Soon he'd die and she would whisper I love you too.
And lye beside him
as the church bells sing
She'd never leave him.
She was scared as fuck
And drank too much
Lost for days in powders and smoke
Poisoned by her thoughts
And taken by her fear
Father and daughter travelled the world
By little grey specs which told a story
Of a man who's days had run out
And a girl who had far too many she could of shared
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Author:
eloisef (
Offline) - Published: September 5th, 2016 21:28
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Comments2
SAD....VERY SAD...BUT NICE WORK!
Awh thank you so much! Nice to hear some positive feedback! That's what late night thoughts do to me 😆
Yeah, its at times what LIFE in general does to me,,,reality is what it is ..anyway...It deserves positive feedback. It is a nice piece for your body of Work...that's w hat I'm attempting with this site..take care and read my work if you like... I would like to know your opinion
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