Patiently waiting I am alone,standing on the edge of ecstasy,
balancing in the dark. The night breeze blows and from it comes a memory.
A memory of your beautiful smile, I say your name and the echoes return the same.....
In the church of my senses, I am baptized in your beauty.
My soul saved and reborn through your touch, satisfying my temptation,
though you have only smiled at me. For now dreams of you quench my thirst.....
I just never knew I could drink this much .....
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Author:
Jeff (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was my first and only attempt at another style. It was written in 2004
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Comments3
Very nice.
Thanks for your time to comment...I really appreciate it
Isn't it great to be noticed by someone whom you believe is special? Just makes your day.
It certainly does. Thank you for your comment and your time....I really appreciate it
This one is awesome man...Really like it a lot...I like how you escaped from your usual style and did something different here
Thanks man...I certainly appreciate your comment.
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