Patiently waiting I am alone,standing on the edge of ecstasy,

balancing in the dark. The night breeze blows and from it comes a memory.


A memory of your beautiful smile, I say your name and the echoes return the same.....

In the church of my senses, I am baptized in your beauty.


My soul saved and reborn through your touch, satisfying my temptation, 

though you have only smiled at me. For now dreams of you quench my thirst.....


I just never knew I could drink this much .....


  • ShadedSorrow

    Very nice.

    • Jeff

      Thanks for your time to comment...I really appreciate it

    • Augustus

      Isn't it great to be noticed by someone whom you believe is special? Just makes your day.

      • Jeff

        It certainly does. Thank you for your comment and your time....I really appreciate it


        This one is awesome man...Really like it a lot...I like how you escaped from your usual style and did something different here

        • Jeff

          Thanks man...I certainly appreciate your comment.

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