Eros Imploded

The 2 A.M Writer

You come with teary eye

You burned me

But yet I'm as dry as stone

And twice the gray

Your bridge burned and now you're fleeing

Asking me for the savior 

Yet if it never was sparked

Would you have come running to me?

I was once your angel

Your one to love and play with

Your puppet for weeks

Now the string is sniped, and the feelings melted

What is to forgive?

All my feeling burned and eroded

I slept in dirt under your deceit

But now I've risen thorn bush


Taking back your space

  • Author: The 2 A.M Writer (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 23rd, 2016 23:49
  • Comment from author about the poem: Feeling of being betrayed by someone you care about and no being able to look at them that same. Whether friend or lover, the feelings immediately disintegrate when deceit is discovered
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 25
  • Users favorite of this poem: jemina, LIGHT WARRIOR.



    This is AMAZING...Beautifully written

  • lysistrata

    One of your best,these last couple of months.
    Keep Writing😯

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