When the darkness comes ,it comes , it comes ,
Without pity or remorse , it takes like a river creating its own course ,
It surges through your body , taking over your mind , with mental chains it starts to bind !
It locks up your emotions and ties up your soul , then you realise it's taken control ,
You try to reach out and cry for help , but you speak a different language now which no-one can tell ,
How long will it last , only it knows , have mercy please darkness and let me go !
-
Author:
ses (
Offline) - Published: September 27th, 2016 03:12
- Category: Sad
- Views: 76
- User favorite of this poem: ShadedSorrow.
Offline)
Comments2
Nice write....good work
Thanks Jeff , appreciate your comments. 👍🏽
Love it great write
Thanks Tony,
This is turning into one of the best choices I have ever made !
Appreciate the feedback mate ! 👍🏽
Welcome
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.