Copyright 2010 Stephanie R Schubert
In full view
The jagged mountain top
Feels like my emotions
The gentle sway of nature in the wind
Feels like my thoughts
Strategically astray
Am I going the wrong way?
As gravity intercedes
Feeling like all my needs
The mountain top
Supersedes
My perspective
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Author:
SSchubert (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 28th, 2016 13:26
- Comment from author about the poem: My son and I went hiking in Boulder canyon - it inspired me to write this. Man I miss that kid.
- Category: Nature
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Comments2
Great write
Nicely done. Rich metaphor.
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