The Elements

Stephanie Showers

 

Copyright 2010 Stephanie R Schubert

 

In full view

The jagged mountain top

Feels like my emotions

 

The gentle sway of nature in the wind

Feels like my thoughts

Strategically astray

Am I going the wrong way?

 

As gravity intercedes

Feeling like all my needs

 

The mountain top

Supersedes

My perspective

 

 

  • Author: SSchubert (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 28th, 2016 13:26
  • Comment from author about the poem: My son and I went hiking in Boulder canyon - it inspired me to write this. Man I miss that kid.
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 20
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  • Tony36

    Great write

  • Augustus

    Nicely done. Rich metaphor.



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