Had to wait till the shield was down
Waited patiently for your strike
Got to bust the wall
Break the chains
Burn my bridge
Oh, whatever you wish
Cause you know I'd do anything
...
Sweet pear turned bitter and thick
Busted a tooth
But it's okay
I had the morphine ready for it anyways
...
Oh how I was the oracle
The anxious time traveler
I saw the future I thought
But you wrote that history
And yes, it came true
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The 2 A.M Writer (
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- Comment from author about the poem: How when you have a gut feeling something will go wrong. But right when you feel safe and secure, it all blows up in your face.
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"I saw the future I though":TYPO?
Good Flow,except the closing line..
Could add some extra?!
I hope everything is FINE.
Lol dang typo. But I actually like the ending line simply for the fact that it's so abrupt and quickly ends the flow. Kind of how things can just keep falling down and breaking away but they then might just stop, or like you emotionally black out to all of the chaos around you. But thanks 🙂
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