The great boat will sink
it struggles on the brink
of forceful, treacherous waves
the seasond captain saw
the crew stand in awe
as the mast broke and vanished in the haze
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That is a sinking feeling, no pun intended. Nice.
I can picture the mighty sea engulfing the entire ship and its crew. An adventuresome poem for sure. ~ Sonia
Well, I am left to guess what happened to the ship to make it sink? It is short, and leaves the reader guessing...or this is a symbolic short poem to reflect a sinking feeling the author is trying to depict... Nice!
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