I think I'm depressed?
I don't know yet, cause I don't know what feeling this is..
I haven't experienced this before...
waking up and feeling no warmth...
the days have become cold... and pass as fast as they come...
1 day to next and then another one..
people say they are there to speak, but I feel it's not me who needs to talk...
rather listen because I have become so lazy it's like my mouth forgot to walk..
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Author:
VhladTheGreat (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wanted to say more and keep going with this poem but I speak of depression and laziness, so I feel the way I cut it short says a lot about how I actually feel... that I want to speak but I'm lost and it's like my "mouth forgot how to walk".. so I feel there is a second half to the poem that isn't there... a silent poem in the way it ends and makes you feel.
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
I like this. It is very thought provoking and deep.
Thank you!! I wrote ALOT but I've never shared anything so the feedback means alot😊😊 I might be posting everyday!
I never have either and I just joined. You should post every day!!! it does mean a lot
hope you read my one post: "I am a strong silent one"
Thanks. 🙂
I am compelled to say this is a great poem because if I don't... I would hate to read the sequel to this... However, it is very grim, and I like it, but hope your not experiencing this personally. If so, would like to know more...
Thank you..! It means a lot, and I am currently experiencing this.. it's why the poem ends the way it does.. I want to speak up, I want to say more.. I want to do something, anything... but feel empty... I feel like the 2nd half that isn't there..
A very well written poem...a great job on this
Thank you! I've never shared anything before so the positive feedback really means a lot.. I'll be posting more!
I certainly look forward to reading more
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