In this troubled heart I've found
no peace to call my own
My tortured mind won't let me give
the love I want to show
I'm doing all I know to do
to let go of my pain
With every effort that I make
it never seems to change
I'm trapped within these darkened thoughts
that's locked inside a tomb
With no way out I face the fear
that madness will insue
What must I do to conquer all
the demons haunting me
I struggle with the grasp I had
on my own sanity
With thoughts like mine it's really hard
to function everyday
God, please just free my mind again
before I go insane
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Author:
Jeff (
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This would be great lyrics for a song.
Thank you for your time to comment... It is most appreciated. What kind of music... Do you think?
I agree it would make a great song
Thank you Tony... . I certainly appreciate it. What kind of music would you put to this?
Welcome, as for music I think Rock n Roll or maybe a rap. It really could work with any type
It would be great to hear it in a song
Yes it would
A lyrical soulful song poem ! The plea to God sums it up nicely. I like the mixture of freeverse n rhyme in it, I tend to do that sometimes. The format is very poetic too. Thumbs up.
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Thank you for your time to comment on my poem. I certainly appreciate it.. What do you think would be a good music style?
I was thinking of Country. There is a song "please release me, let me go". You could almost use your poem to that song.
Chills down my spine!
keep with that inner song my friend
It carries further than you think
Thank you for the passion in this
I hope you found some peace.
Thanks for commenting...it is very much appreciated
Thank you for taking time to comment...i certainly appreciate it
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