Jeff

Lost Within

In this troubled heart I've found 

no peace to call my own

My tortured mind won't let me give 

the love I want to show

 

I'm doing all I know to do 

to let go of my pain

With every effort that I make 

it never seems to change

 

I'm trapped within these darkened thoughts 

that's locked inside a tomb

With no way out I face the fear 

that madness will insue

 

What must I do to conquer all 

the demons haunting me

I struggle with the grasp I had 

on my own sanity

 

With thoughts like mine it's really hard 

to function everyday

God, please just free my mind again 

before I go insane

 

 

 

Comments7

  • Augustus

    This would be great lyrics for a song.

    • Jeff

      Thank you for your time to comment... It is most appreciated. What kind of music... Do you think?

    • Tony36

      I agree it would make a great song

      • Jeff

        Thank you Tony... . I certainly appreciate it. What kind of music would you put to this?

        • Tony36

          Welcome, as for music I think Rock n Roll or maybe a rap. It really could work with any type

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        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

          A lyrical soulful song poem ! The plea to God sums it up nicely. I like the mixture of freeverse n rhyme in it, I tend to do that sometimes. The format is very poetic too. Thumbs up.

          Pls do check out my latest poem too. I'm a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.

          • Jeff

            Thank you for your time to comment on my poem. I certainly appreciate it.. What do you think would be a good music style?

          • Augustus

          • Augustus

            I was thinking of Country. There is a song "please release me, let me go". You could almost use your poem to that song.

          • Poetic Dan

            Chills down my spine!
            keep with that inner song my friend
            It carries further than you think
            Thank you for the passion in this
            I hope you found some peace.

            • Jeff

              Thanks for commenting...it is very much appreciated

            • Jeff

              Thank you for taking time to comment...i certainly appreciate it



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