moments came between us, unfortunate as it seems
deliverance by a shock that broke your world inside
playing stupid whilst the violins played midnight til morn
yes it felt it wasn't right when your heart burst and spat it out
a place with the uncertainty which was full of haunting you
I watched your smile turn bitter with the taste of no return
loving arms held out that are now gone, lost and sold
a walk is taken away when a back is up against a wall
yet, still standing there and waiting for all to come and dance
with a string playing a note of love pretending to be cool
the Moon the stars, the universe, Pluto, Neptune and Mars
I fell in love with Venus as it flowed through my heart and veins
stood to test some strength in togetherness, lay the law down low
so created by a flash of impossible time that got caught on tow
stretched to the max which burden did you want to crack open
living space between us and in knowing whoever you are
breaking a bond, a tie, a love, a hope, a dream passed us by.
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"Taste of no return"--- when you see that on a lovers fave or hear it in their voice, your heart sinks.
it also feels like we are towing behind us a tonne of lost love. I love your poems by the way. Augustus. you have a very beautiful mind with a deepened and caring thoughtful way for poetic brilliance. your rhyming is a thing I find myself having to adjust to with great difficulties. my friends tell me it will get easier along the way but I have been trying for ages. every poem I write is created in no higher than 15 minutes and finished. I may make a few adjustments but generally not much. letting me finger tips type in the way they want to go is fine by me. saves me a lot of thinking because I am starting to compile a bit of work and I want to keep going like that.
Wow. You made my day. Half of the poems I published were written in the 80's and lay in a file since then. Some I tweaked a little before publishing on this site. Most poems I write come from some emotional experience. I take an hour or 2 to write, then sit on them for 2-3 days before reading again. I try to trim unnecessary words unless they helpful to the rhythm.
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