I turn my collar up against the wind
and place my eyes along the skyline
Hoping in the darkness for some sign of you
a colder truth I’ve never known
I pull my jacket tight across my chest
and watch the waves crash upon your shadow
Knowing the tide is like your receding heart
washing my footsteps from the sand
The sun has now gone, the moon in flight
and my hopes rise o’er the waves
My collar frozen and my soul on fire,
—as my wait begins again
(Villanova Pennsylvania: October, 2016)
- Author: Kurt Philip Behm ( Offline)
- Published: October 14th, 2016 08:08
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
I like the cold metaphor. When you get the cold shoulder from a cold heart you need to pull your collar up and tighten your jacket. Is there a little hope at the end or is that anger?
No there's hope, but it's laced with an uncertain futility.
Thanks A.
Great write, cold shoulders are never nice, sometimes they seem like blocks of ice, sorry I got a little carried away
Thanks, Tony and you're absolutely right.
🙂
So now you have a cold shoulder and you've washed your footsteps from the sand. I was gonna ask if there was still hope there was still some sign of you/her/it? But I think I got my answer from a previous review. Great poem.
Thanks, very kind!
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