Have you been feeling



have you been feeling some what
feeling blue or somewhat depressed
are you feeling angry at yourself
look around at the people you surround yourself with.
maybe they are a cause of it
are you feeling angry at the world
maybe it's the path you decided to walk down
take another right turn
maybe then you'll start to feel free
nd start to feel inner peace
are you feeling neglected,
do you fell as if the almighty father has blessed everyone
but he's left you stranded
maybe look at yourself
really look st yourself and ask yourself " what needs correcting"
becz god doesn't leave nobody out. everyone is protected.

are you feeling as if the world is closing in on you
do you feel as if you have no where or noone to turn to ?
all you need is yourself if you gain anyone else on your life journey that's just a bonus on yourself Is where you need to focus



  • Author: yo_hommiecee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 25th, 2016 05:30
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 30


  • Tony36

    Great write

    • yo_hommiecee

      Thank you 😊

      • Tony36


      • Augustus

        Good advice in poetic style.

        • yo_hommiecee

          Thank you, I've seen my friend going through a rough patch so I said I'll write about it and give him some adivce

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