The tears I've cried
create a raging river
eroding my mind
corroding my heart
I try to block the pain with a smile
but when everybody leaves
The smile breaks, and I drown in my sorrows again.
I barely survive when I break down
though I always make it back the next day
with another hole in my life
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Author:
Winter light (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 25th, 2016 11:04
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Great write
Soulful and creatively phrased in great wording and metaphor. Yor talent ought to cheer u up. Kudos.
Pls do coment my latest poem too. I'm a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
I like the corroding heart line. Category love? More like sad.
Nicely done.
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