Before you fall,
you’ve got to stand
Your voice once stalled,
no reprimand
The paradigm floats,
on swamps that drain
Where praise cries out,
false hope again
(Villanova Pennsylvania: October, 2016)
- Author: Kurt Philip Behm ( Offline)
- Published: October 30th, 2016 08:21
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
This is an excellent poem. I love how you wrote "the paradigm floats on swamps that drain". Breathtaking metaphor. A new favorite!
Thanks Chrissy. You're too kind!
Kurt
My pleasure! I look forward to reading your poetry
He certainly has a way with words๐
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