The Garden’s Colors Tend to Fade
This Garden grows in a bed of shade
As the light is dim where the seeds were laid,
And in places where the sun can only half invade…
So the flower’s colors tend to fade.
From the rise of dawn till the start of night
There are more shadows than there is of light,
Yet this garden wills itself in spite
In the speckled patches where the shade is bright.
“How odd,” they said, “that you planted there,
You could have planted anywhere.”
And even though that space was bare,
“What a waste,” they said, “of time and care.”
But how many other things of matter
Whose initial worth were left in tatters,
Surpassed the first from beyond the latter;
Are now fertile grounds for furnished flatter?”
No, this garden grows just where it should
Its roots took hold because they could.
Through droughts and storms it still withstood
To quiver light through trembling wood.
So by and by from time to time
That garden lingers in my mind,
On what else remains still poised to find…
Or what was lost when I was blind.
Still, I have a garden that lives in shade.
And it’s something pretty that I made
And though the colors tend to fade
Not for a thousand other gardens would I trade.
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John Snowdon (
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Comments4
This is a beautifully crafted rhyming poem. Graceful!
Great meter, and rhyme. Those two together are great, but when you add in the flowing imagery we see (and hear, and smell, and touch) in this poem, a truly magnificent tableau is created/
Beautifully written
I bet your garden is as beautiful as your poem. Love the subject and the execution. Some are too quick to judge the efforts of others.
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