Laura Patchell Jimenez


Lady all the time

Awesome and devine

U caught my eye from day one

Revealed the darkness

Arose the sun


Played a major part in me being happy

All negativity went away

Today doesnt mean like yesterday

Can still remember our first day

Here wondering how we dropped the ball

Even through it all

Long for every moment we shared again

Long for my special friend


Just wish for a button i could push restart

I offer you my loyalty from the bottom of my heart

Minus the drama

Equalling positive instead

No adding this that and the third

Evening up to just what you and i said

Zeroes never getting ahead

  • Author: Quietstorm_Dru (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 1st, 2016 17:24
  • Category: Friendship
  • Views: 59
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  • Christina8

    Nice poem. Looks like you wanna turn back the hands of time. Hope things work out for you!

    • Quietstorm_Dru

      Back when I wrote it yeah...but thanks

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