Mushrooms and meadows
Sunshine and shadows
Gentle ripples on the calm river
Foaming rapids in white water
The jungle echoes in the semi-darkness
while daylight creepy-crawlies clear the mess.
Peasants toiling and pheasants scratching
as I spy a cricket somersaulting
The cactus the desert's prickly femme-fatale
elsewhere a lone leaf floats in the canal
Prairie dogs go popping
while hares go hopping
and ladies go shopping
Swans have formed a V-line
The flora too is divine
as bees swarm in bee-line.
Seista seizes birdlovers too
Thus they miss out on the hoopoe's song
For the hoopoe, it does not sing on cue
since a bird may sing anytime to woo.
What a medley eh of scenery
Murky eve and dawning greenery
Ah, wherever you go nature's so panoramic
While we make and take pictures
God made what's picturesque!
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S.zaynab.M.V.Kamoonpury (Pseudonym) (
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Thanx soo much for the review.
Actually amsuing. Keep the poetry up.
Amusing eh? Fine ok warm thanx pal.
Wonderful write
Thanx for reading Tony.
Welcome
good poem! definitely paints a picture.
Warmest thanx for the feedback. Best wishes.
I like the mental picture i get from this photo, gives me a warm feeling. I feel like they words almost have a trippy, kinda indie rock feel to them. Good write!
Indie rock eh, thanx soo much for comment n save.
Course my dude
Beautiful picture with corresponding words. (Some new to me 🙂
Kurt
Thanx soo much. New words? Maybe hoopoes aren't that common in yer place. Cheers.
I so love your take on nature all through out your poem, prairies dogs and cactus paint such a vivid memory of the American desert and plains, such a gentle, vivid poem filled with amazing imagery...Bravo my friend! Mel
My warmest thanx pal, soo glad to know it depicts american scenery too. I wrote what I watched as in TV documentaries. The cactus was in the Gobi desert.
Take care.
Beautiful work of art..
You painted an amazing picture with your words.. For a moment I was there 🌳🌾🍂🐺🕷🐻
Warm thanx. U have some cool great emoticons there. Don't know how to do that.
Warm thanx. U have some cool great emoticons there. Don't know how to do that.
The emoti icons are off my iPhone 😆
You're a beautiful word painter! I enjoyed the images. Thank you.
And u r a kind reviewer, thanx for such a sweet response. Warmest cheers.
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