Hopeless hope


When I saw you

standing there 

a ray of hope 

started to appear 

but then you disappeared

into thin air

and all I found

where blinding tears

and freezing fears. 


  • Tony36

    Wonderfully written and a true joy to read

  • Once_In_A_While_

    Wow, last to lines really got me. Beautiful piece!

  • Augustus

    Sad and fearful. Loosing someone special.

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