With death on the floor,
he tried to hang up his salvation
But the coat hook to eternity
was full
The closet door to redemption,
now locked from the inside
The cloak of forgiveness,
—for someone else to wear
(Villanova Pennsylvania: November, 2016)
- Author: Kurt Philip Behm ( Offline)
- Published: November 21st, 2016 10:14
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 27
Comments6
Some stuff we do is unpardonable. I have a tough time just forgiving myself for past stupidities. Nicely done.
Thanks, A.
Wonderful write
Thanks so much!
The metaphors are amazing! Very nice poem!
Thanks, Christina!
Wow great analogy here in metaphor. The comparison is impressively done. Kudos for the poetic style and format too. Great to read from u again.
Thanks so much!
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