what to feel what to do
by Kat
what am i here for
what am i going to do
what should i be happy
what should i hate
should i hate you
or should i love you
should i be happy
should i know what to do
what can i do
can i stop u
or can i cry
can i love you
or will you not let me
will i care
or will i not
what am i here for
what should i do
will i go far
as far as the moon
or ill i stay here
will i wait for u
will i be okay
will i care
will i not
i not sure
i not happy
i not even sad
i not even mad
what should i feel
what will i feel
what should i do
ill say goodbye
goodbye to you
you hurt
you tease
you play a game
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Author:
Kitkat231997 (
Offline) - Published: November 22nd, 2016 02:48
- Comment from author about the poem: please tell me what u guys and gals think
- Category: Gothic
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Comments4
A cool rap like songish lyrical poem in bouncy rhyming. Thumbs up. Keep writing.
U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem too . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.
thanks
Interesting, this is a person with no sense of self, looking for others to tell them what to say, what to do. That is a very vulnerable way to be. Nicely done.
Good write
thank you
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