Just Open Your Eyes

brooklyn6timesplus



Just open your eyes 

And see the good in everything 

Be courteous and kind 

Happiness is fulfilling 

Feel the chills 

Of the breeze that blows 

Continue on with your story 

Watch the time as it goes 

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  • Elegant_Style

    your poem might be short but it gave me chills... "Feel the chills/of the breeze that blows..." SO GOOD

    • brooklyn6timesplus

      Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry Elegant Style. Much appreciated.

    • WriteBeLight

      You have a great speaking voice. I like your positive messages. Happy Thanksgiving!

      • brooklyn6timesplus

        Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry WriteBeLight. Much appreciated. Happy Thanksgiving to you as well!

      • Tony36

        You have such an awesome way with world's my friend. Great write



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