And just when the sky turned orange, a bird - the paragon of putting absolute trust in the Provider, the epitome of flying high whilst keeping balance - set off for home. But I should commend you instead bcos I believe when it's feather fell down on your hand u turned it into a golden quill pen and wrote your story above the flying bird known for it's numerous fine quality. You did so bcos the sky isn't your limit.
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Author:
Abu Aeesh (
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Great write
Thank you
Welcome
Wonderful stuff. I absolutely love this, I am quite envious of this work!
Thank you, but you shouldn't be, really.. but thanks though
Grammar is very important. I like the use of color to express the point.
Thank you. I agree, grammar is of great importance and so I will very much appreciate it if you will correct me whenever I go wrong. Thank you in advance
No need to correct. Your message is great. We cannot always be perfect in anything. I always re-read but sometimes you just have to let it go😄
Thank you
Welcome. Thanks to you too.
You're welcome
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