The Quills in your hand

Abu Aeesh

And just when the sky turned orange, a bird - the paragon of putting absolute trust in the Provider, the epitome of flying high whilst keeping balance - set off for home. But I should commend you instead bcos I believe when it's feather fell down on your hand u turned it into a golden quill pen and wrote your story above the flying bird known for it's numerous fine quality. You did so bcos the sky isn't your limit.

  • Author: Abu Aeesh (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 25th, 2016 12:57
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  • Tony36

    Great write

    • Abu Aeesh

      Thank you

      • Tony36

        Welcome

      • Yorke

        Wonderful stuff. I absolutely love this, I am quite envious of this work!

        • Abu Aeesh

          Thank you, but you shouldn't be, really.. but thanks though

        • WriteBeLight

          Grammar is very important. I like the use of color to express the point.

          • Abu Aeesh

            Thank you. I agree, grammar is of great importance and so I will very much appreciate it if you will correct me whenever I go wrong. Thank you in advance

            • WriteBeLight

              No need to correct. Your message is great. We cannot always be perfect in anything. I always re-read but sometimes you just have to let it go😄

              • Abu Aeesh

                Thank you

                • WriteBeLight

                  Welcome. Thanks to you too.

                  • Abu Aeesh

                    You're welcome



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