Condescension

SilverXball

You stand over me

Telling me that I am wrong

I still cannot believe

That I have lasted this long

 

I feel my heart exploding

With the condescension I receive

You told me all I know is not true

All I was taught, all I believe

 

I am forced to play this game of yours

In which you're always right

While I am left, unsound

Though I try, with all my might

 

I swear you have no reason

Rhythm, rhyme, or heart

You look at me, with such distaste

And just like that, I'm set apart

 

You are my family

I wish I could undo

You think so little of me

And think so highly of you

 

I know you don't understand

I know you don't see me cry

But for once in all my years

Could you please just tell me why?

  • Author: A Silver Sky (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 30th, 2016 14:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: My everyday life with my brother.
  • Category: Family
  • Views: 36
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  • LIGHT WARRIOR

    This is very heartfelt...and very sad...it brought tears to my eyes...nice work though, for sure..

  • willyweed

    very well done, perfect rhyme and meter. I salute you! peace ww

  • SabreLi

    I am also going through some issues with my brother at the minute so I can relate. The pain is magnified profoundly because it is family; the very people you expect to support and love you through thick and thin. I hope the situation gets better for you; because if you can't count on family... Please keep writing, and keep your chin up 🙂 xx

  • Daniel

    Wow, simply wow!

  • Quemis

    Family stuff like this is so, so hard.

    Stay brave and creative. Vigilant passion can save lives.



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