From this light ten thousand words,
but few among can know your song.
I hear and feel your presence now,
as if by eternal beauty somehow.
A day so long to fill this empty void,
difficult to breath this single life.
Punctures split my bubble surround,
hearing now all manor of sound.
True life envelops just a small number,
some feel,some hear but few really see.
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
I really love that last line! Good work
Thank you christinaknaak
for those kind words..
Great write
Thank you tony
Welcome
I really enjoyed reading your poem however tragic. "difficult to breath this single life" Very heavy stuff. Great poem!
Thank you chrissy
Single, punctured, empty and small. Can't get much lower than that. Nicely done.
Thank you Augustus
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